Waking
Stretching Yawning
Rising
Washing
Brushing
Dressing
Smelling
Sitting
Eating
Pouring
Steaming
Sipping
Scolding
Dropping
Cursing
Bending
Kneeling
Cleaning
Realizing
Lateness.
Jumping
Rushing
Slamming
Screeching
Reversing
Shifting
Driving
Veering
Passing
Steering
Slowing
Stopping
Waiting
Waiting
Waiting
For the light to change.
Accelerating
Cruising
Cracking
Breezing
Refreshing
Lighting
Inhaling
Calming
Spacing
Listening
Singing
Arriving
Parking
Gathering
Jogging
Greeting
Elevator
Rising
Hurry
Meeting!
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ReplyDeleteThis had great rhythm and tempo! I really did feel the rush reading this.
ReplyDeleteAnd the periods were surprisingly emphatic!
thanks D. im trying to create a full story of few words. ill try another one soon. i kind of like how they flow...
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