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Monday, April 20, 2009

The morning rush...

Waking
Stretching 
Yawning
Rising
Washing 
Brushing 
Dressing
Smelling
Sitting
Eating  
Pouring 
Steaming 
Sipping 
Scolding
Dropping 
Cursing 
Bending
Kneeling
Cleaning
Realizing
Lateness. 
Jumping 
Rushing
Slamming
Screeching 
Reversing
Shifting
Driving
Veering 
Passing 
Steering
Slowing
Stopping
Waiting 
Waiting 
Waiting 
For the light to change. 
Accelerating 
Cruising 
Cracking
Breezing 
Refreshing
Lighting 
Inhaling 
Calming
Spacing
Listening 
Singing
Arriving  
Parking
Gathering 
Jogging
Greeting 
Elevator
Rising 
Hurry 
Meeting!


4 comments:

  1. This had great rhythm and tempo! I really did feel the rush reading this.

    And the periods were surprisingly emphatic!

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  2. thanks D. im trying to create a full story of few words. ill try another one soon. i kind of like how they flow...

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